题型有：1. PART ONE 2. PART TWO
PART ONE
1． You recently attended an exhibition and saw some equipment you think your company should buy. Write an email to your company’s Purchasing Manager: saying what the equipment is suggesting how the equipment could benefit the company explaining why it is important to place an order soon. Write 40-50 words.
商务英语写作正确答案：Sample A I have a piece of good news to inform you. I saw a new model of laser-printer on the exhibition of last week. It is beautiful and of good quality. Because many companies are very interested in it, I think we’d better make an order soon to replace the old one in our office. Band 3 All content points are covered, and the range of language is satisfactory. Both the format and register are appropriate, and although there are some errors, these do not obscure communication of the message. Sample B I am writing to su
ggest that we could buy an overhead projector I saw in an exhibition. It would be useful to do the presentations of the new products. The XP3 model has the latest technology and, if we order it soon, the supplier will grant us a 20% discount. Regards. Band 5 All points are covered, and language is controlled and concise, and demonstrates a wide lexical range. The register is consistently appropriate, as is the format.
PART TWO
2． The company you work for is expanding rapidly and is looking for new premises. Your operation director is interested in Creativity Alliance Industry Park and has asked you to write a letter to find out more information. Read Creativity Alliance Industry Park’s advertisement below. on which your operation director has already made some notes. Then, using all of your operation director’s handwritten notes, write your letter to Abde Atwan at Creativity Alliance Industry Park. Write 120-140 words.
正确答案：Dear Mr. Atwan, With reference to your advertisement in the local newspaper, I would like to have more information about the building for rent. Could you tell us what ot
her firms are included in the area, and what are the exact sizes of the units available for rent. Regarding the financial help mentioned, could you inform us of the qualifications needed and the application procedures for it? Another point to clarify is the cost of the skilled labour compared with other areas. Finally, we would be grateful if you could send us the information pack to our address. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, William Randolph
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