托福口语模板及参考范文:18岁成人投出选票
托福口语题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
18-year-old adults are not mature enough to vote.
托福口语参考范文:
In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the
ability to vote. Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【括号内的也能够不说】 And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions. 补充例子:For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell us not to just repeat what others say but think by ourselves. So we are mature enough to vote.
托福口语参考答案:
Well, I don't think I can agree with statement because I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vote.【也能够直接说: In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote.】
Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions
independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【补充了一些细节,否则,这第一个理由根本就没有论证,
丢下一句:我18,我成年了,就走了……哎~不要这么傲娇嘛!至少稍
微结合咱们的话题解释一句嘛!】
And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions.
补充例子(能够跟着Pt的答案一路说到结尾):For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about hte information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell me, "Please don't just repeat what others say but think by yourself, think critically." So I am pretty sure that we are mature enough to vote. (/ 语速快的同学,能够挑战加长版结尾So I am pretty sure that we have the capability to decide what is good for the nation and the people and thus we definitely are old enough
to vote. )
这纯粹为了凑时间的结尾,能够不读了:So I think they have both the right and capability to decide what is good for the nations and what is good for the people. So that's why I
think they are old enough and mature enough to vote.【很啰嗦,其实就是因为没有内容了,所以用漫长的结尾来拖时间】
托福口语模板分析:
本文来自亦鸥高分网友shurui,非常赞的发音!这个次之所以没有选择晨读团同学的录音,并不是因为大家的答案【内容】不够好,而
是因为:大家的【发音】错误真的太多了!
18成人
shurui同学是亦鸥有名的淡定大神,不论什么内容,她都说得从
容不迫。这个题的答案虽然:很空洞,但因为发音非常标准,整体的
表达十分流利,第一遍听依然觉得真的很棒!每一次在收听大量晨读团
同学的录音时,Pt都感到,有一件事不得不承认:发音好真的太重
要!1)发音不标准的,根本听不懂啊!2)发音有口音的,听着很难受
啊!3)发音特别好的,心里就觉得ta答得好啊!所以,强烈建议大家,
正音,从今天开始!
这里就不得不再一次强调:我们要做的是【跟读】。除了学内容
之外,还要学答题者的发音,要去模仿,去跟着读。请大家不要仅是
查看推送的内容,然后就开始自己读了——那你的发音错误永远也改
不了哇!一定要点击阅读原文,收听高分回答,并收听Pt在晨读团里
的语音示范,每天坚持再坚持,就一定能跟发音错误说88!
在此,说一下本题的几个常见错误发音:
adult 这个音已经被大家念出花儿来了,Pt听到最奇葩的发音是:“矮倒他”……这都什么鬼???请注意:这个音是/搀谀氂琀/ 或者
/'d氂琀/ (注意,a这个原因发音不同的时候,重音也不一样
哦!shuirui读的就是/搀谀氂琀/ )不要跟我说你的“矮倒他”是英音!英音里的a也不会发成“矮”哒!
mature 这个音,也是各种不同版本,听得Pt都快怀疑人生了。
有人读“吗ture”有人读“马ture” 还有人连ture都不对,读成了“吗ter”。那真是。。。谁能听出来你在说“成熟”啊!我还以为想
说master然后吞了s呢!请注意:这个音是/m't訂夂爂/ 前面不是
/ma/是/m/ 哦!
vote 请大家注意哦!v在发音的时候,要用上牙轻轻咬一下下唇~
不要出现漏风的效果!
接下来,Pt来解释一下我的修改: