第一篇：四级英语作文分析
四/六级英语作文分析
2009年12月四级英语作文：Creating a Green Campus（建设绿校园）作文提示：
1、建设绿校园很重要
2、绿校园不仅指绿的环境……
3、为了建设绿校园，我们应该……
写作提纲：
一般而言，四级写作的结构是三段式，即三段可以完全按照提纲进行：
第一段：绿校园这个话题值得引起重视（很重要）；
第二段：绿校园不仅指绿的环境，还应该和人文精神以及文明建设联系在一起；
第三段：为了建设绿校园，学校、政府和社会各界应该采取哪些措施。范文分析：
Creating a Green Campus
1）Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention. 2）Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be denied.
3）A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. 4）Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment. 5）If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish. 6）In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.
7）In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to create a green campus. 8）In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.
9）Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. 10）Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory result. 11）With these1
measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.
语言分析：
主谓结构：
无论你是多么有经验的演说家，无论你做了多么充分的准备，你都很难在这样嘈杂的招待会上发表演讲。
No matter how experienced a speaker you are, and no matter how well you have prepared, you have difficulty/trouble in making a speech in such a noisy reception.
It is hard that you make a speech.
It is hard for you to make a speech.
被动语态：
the topic of a green campus has been widely debated
that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.
a green campus will be achieved in the near future.
It/there无灵主语句：
If there were no green surrounding among the college students,
it is imperative for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.
it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.
it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.
it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.
虚拟语气：
it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced
it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of
倒装句：
In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.
Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory result.
主从复合句：
the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.
, for its significance cannot be denied.
If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.
a green campus includes not only the places where the students live,
their soul would be not as pure as we wish.
四级英语作文模板to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.
that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.
that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.
用词的替换：environment, surrounding, atmosphere。
高语体词：
…widely debated
…which aroused public attention
indispensable
has a profound impact on
plays a decisive role
it is imperative/ripe/essential that…
enhanced the awareness of
will be achieved in the near future.
名词化：
the growth of college students
the development of college students
the seriousness of the situation
the awareness of the students themselves
第二篇：英语四级作文+英语四级作文大全
英语四级作文英语四级作文模板大全
一、说明原因型模块
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory ——nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注释：
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
6、说明XX优点三的影响
相应作文：
The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory ——nothing is more valuable than self-confidence. It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your d
reams will come true. On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe. Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one's ambitions). With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
二、说明原因型模块
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
相应作文：
The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). Many parents are worried about the impact of so muc
h television on children. The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover, (the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies). Especially when (the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.
三、说明原因型模块
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7).
注释：
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
相应作文：
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2 onous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows. the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of
great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.