but also not only
你是××中学的××，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：
1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方；
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out.
First of all , the hike needs to be planned in more detail as the informationreleased online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last. Also , we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. After all , the sche
me should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. What’s more , I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Shanghai” through additional activities. Upon arrival at the Bund, Ipropose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the Huangpu River. By appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper insight into the authentic Shanghai culturemixed with exotic flavor.  Thus , the experience may well be unforgettable one,  because it makes us move, enables us to discover the scenic beauty of Shanghai, which will well achieve the purpose of organizing the activity.
All in all , if the hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.
Yours sincerely
Wang Lei
thus First According to the survey while
假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参与了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调
研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1. 描述调研数据；
2. 分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
Recently Ihave conducted a survey about “whether parents are proud of their children” in  my school. The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children only  60% of children  hold  the same opinion. ,we  can  conclude  that  the  number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children.
There  seems  to  be  two  causes  as  we  tried  to  figure  out  what  led  to  this  subtle
difference. ,conservative  Chinese  parents  are never  accustomed  to conveying  directly how much they are proud of their children.This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop  a  strong  sense  of  self-confidence.  Second ,the  current  education  system  excessively emphasizes the value of  academic performance, forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of t
alents for art and sports,which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented  educational methods,a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.
but also not only
学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你
已到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：
1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；
2.阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
Dear Sir/Madam,
the annual Campus Reading Festival is to be held and an advertising picture for the brochure is open to be recommended, I can’t wait to write to you, offering my humble opinion. The picture that I want to r
ecommend features three students sitting around a table, reading and discussing pleasantly. From the big smile on their faces, we can tell that they are having great fun.
In the first place, the picture will catch the readers’ eye. Any student who sees the picture will wonder what the three students are discussing about passionately. What’s more, the picture demonstrates what the festival is about. The festival aims to create a platform where students can enjoy the pleasure of sharing opinions about what they have read with peers, which will further their  understanding.  The  value  of  reading  lies in  enriching  our  individual’s knowledge in inspiring the minds of the youth to share their innermost feelings. Just as the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one”, I believe group reading or discussing is beneficial.
To sum up, the picture will surely remind the students of the pleasure of reading arouse their passion for reading. I sincerely hope that this picture will soon appear in the brochure, spreading the idea to my peer schoolmates during the reading festival.
Yours sincerely
Pan Yang On hearing the news that上海高考作文
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学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康，娱乐，文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚，职业规划，读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞， 给校报编辑写一封，表达你的观点。邮件必须包括以下内容。
你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s  English newspaper.
In my point of view , among health, entertainment and culture, I would choose “entertainment” to be the one to be eliminated. Although it’s a necessity for  students to get some relaxation, I’m worried that the main news that the entertainment column offers will eventually
turn into celebrity gossip, which is development of our school. We are already helpful to the  growth  of  students  living in a world that is crammed with to the useless information, and there’s no need to add some more. The main focus of the newspaper is supposed to be placed on the students —not Brad Pitt’s new movie.
the column to be added, I highly recommend the “career planning”. I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to  give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs. This may help students gain a better understanding of their strengths and weakness and thus figure out their goals. To me, it’s much more meaningful than “fashion” or “readers’ feedback”.
All mentioned above can be turned into reality with your appreciation and permission . I’m looking forward to your favorable reply and a better school newspaper.
Yours sincerely
Cheng Fei
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上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’ve heard recently that you planned to hold an exhibit for famous paintings in the coming future . I’m really excited about it in that it provides a precious opportunity for ordinary citizens to appreciate these wonderful works of art. I write this letter to tell you my opinion on where to hold it.
As far as I am concerned , compared with community library, the museum may be a better choice for such a professional exhibition. To begin
with , while I admit that the library may be more convenient since we can go there easily, museum is sure to improve the level of exhibition. With its better condition and the history atmosphere it provides, we’ll enjoy a more comfortable
view , it is the museum that has a magic power to persuade us to behave ourselves, while the library in
stead cannot do that.
its convenience, I believe that it is worthwhile to go to the museum to appreciate these paintings. Thanks for taking time to read my letter. I will appreciate it if you will take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Wang Min
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