初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．假定你是李平，计划暑假去伦敦旅游，互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确，请给该旅行社发一封，询问有关情况．
要求：（1）邮件内容必须包含图中所指的问题，但可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
（2）词数80左右．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
（3）参考词汇：入场费﹣﹣entrance fee
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London． I'm writing for more information about the two days' tour of London．
Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？I have something important to do on that day so I'd like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．I really want to have a look at the big stores in London．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？其次，你能告诉我预计回来的确切时间吗？
I can expect to be back是定语从句，修饰先行词time
【高分句型二】
I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．我想知道是否会有时间购物．
I wonder+宾语从句；if引导宾语从句
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London．（写信的目的）
Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？【高分句型一】I have something important to do on that day so I'
d like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．【高分句型二】I really want to have a look at the big stores in London．（询问的要点）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
初中语文作文2．下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，每个调查项目之后有几个选项，请将符合自己实际情况的选项打"⋅"（除前两个项目外，其他均可多选）．然后，根据你的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈你的想法．
课文课外阅读问卷调查表 | |
调查项目 | 选项 |
（1）阅读兴趣 | A．喜欢 B．有点喜欢 C．不喜欢 |
（2）阅读时间 | A．每天阅读 B．有时阅读 C．很少阅读 D．完全不读 |
（3）阅读内容 | A．小说 B．散文 C．诗歌 D．其他 |
（4）阅读目的 | A．提高语文水平 B．增加知识 C．休闲娱乐 D．其他 |
（5）阅读书籍 | A．自己选择 B．父母购买 C．教师指定 D．其他 |
（6）影响阅读的因素 | A．学习压力太大 B．教师没有要求 C．没有书籍可读 D．其他 |
注意：
①无须写标题；
②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目，以及关于课外阅读的想法；
③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
④词数为80左右．
参考词汇：fiction小说；essay散文．
【分析】这是一份给材料作文．首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，然后根据自己的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈自己的想法．要用第一人称，一般现在时态．文中可加however、so等连词，可使文章更通顺．
【解答】参考范文1
I like reading very much．I always do some reading in my free time．My favorite books are fictions．On weekends，I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like．My parents buy some books for me as gifts．I think reading is very interesting and helpful．It not only makes me relaxed but also improves my Chinese，especially my writing．However，as students of Grade Nine，we are under great pressure of study，and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class．So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read．I believe the more we read，the better we'll do in exams．
短文写作参考范文2
I like reading a little．Sometimes I do some reading just for fun．I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting．At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons，and I also borrow some from my friends．Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading．But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read，such as fictions，essays and some science books．I hope she can choose some more interesting books fo
r us．Maybe that will make me like reading．As we all know，interest is the best teacher．
【点评】书面表达要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容．在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题．审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等．
3．题目②
曾子曰："吾日三省吾身．"自省（self﹣reflection） 有助于解决自身的问题，也是自我完善和自我超越的必经之路．
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