请求信英语作文100字
I.习作要求:
假定你是王琳,给某电脑公司的销售部经理写一封请求信,请求他给你寄该公司当天在Shanghai Sta广告中的家用电脑的详细说明。
注意:
1、词数:120 左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
如何续保车险Dear Sir,
……
Yours faithfully,
Wang Lin
【习作指导】
本文是请求信,即对收信人提出某种请求,并希望能得到对方帮助或希望对方满足要求的信函。写作时,应注意事项有:
电脑桌面风景1.和其他普通书信—样,请求信由写信人地址、日期、收信人姓名及地址、称呼、正文、结尾客套语、署名七个部分组成。写信人的地址要详细,以便对方回复。注意措辞礼貌,流畅准确,格式规范。
2.写作三步走:开头应首先介绍自已,并介绍写此请求信的原因,提出请求;然后要详细的介绍提出请求的原因和具体的内容;结尾最好重申一下请求,并表达期盼对方早日回复和表示感谢。
3.常用句式示例:
I’m wondering if you could spare some time to??眼膜怎么贴
I am writing in the hope of your assistance to ……
Could please do me the favor of??
Thank you for your time patience.
I should feel much obliged /grateful if you will ……
…will be greatly appreciated…
Looking forward to your reply/ hearing from you.
II.学生习作:
Dear Sir,
My name is Wang Lin, a middle school student of Shanghai. I’m interested in the personal computers which are advertised in today’s Shanghai Star. I want very much to get more informations①about the various computers that you have and I am writing in the hope of your assistance. ②Could you please post the ituctions about the computers to me? I can be contacted at the following address: 130 Baihai Road Shanghai, 200030. Should you
ever wish to e-mail me, here is my e-mail address: *******************.
I should feel much obliged if you will kindly send me some details of your computers at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your reply.
英语书信Yours faithfully,Wang Lin①information是不可数名词,所以informations应改为information。
②本句精彩生动。使用了地道的短语(in the hope of);和定语从句(the various computers that you have)尤其是现在进行时态(I am writing…),生动地描述了写信的情景,充分展示了习作者较高的语用能力。
III. 教师点评:
【亮点赏析】正文开头“My name is…”介绍自己,然后说明原因“I’m interested in the personal computers…。“I want very much to…”直奔主题,道明了写信的目的;接着“I am writing in the hope of your assistance. Could you please…”礼貌地请求对方寄上详细说明书。并提供详细联系地址和方式。最后他用“I should feel much obliged if you will…”这个句型,而不仅仅是一个简单的Thanks。行文条理、清晰、流畅。
2.范文使用了规范的短语或句型:be interested in /in the hope of /Could you please?/ Should you ever wish to?/at
your earliest convenience语言准确、礼貌、得体;
3.习作使用了高级复杂的句子结构,如:名词做同位语(a middle school student of Shanghai);定语从句(computers which are advertised./ various computers that you have);条件状语从句(I should feel much obliged if you will )等,使文章丰富、达意、可读。
总之,本篇虽有一处错误,但不失为一篇佳作。
(山东金乡二中高三英语组田苏春:272200)篇二:感谢信英语作文100字
感谢信
dear mr. liu,
please take a moment to fill out the enclosed card in order to receive lifetime technical support, special prices and updates.
if you have any questions concerning our products, please call our customer service department at 1234-567. again, thank you for your purchase.
sincerely yours,
wulei
wulei
manager, channel marketing department
感谢信
1)感谢信的写法
人们在交往中常需要相互致谢,收到别人赠送的礼物,得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问,都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。
感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人,收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑,感谢的目的也就失去了。因此,写感谢信首先得真心诚意。
感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈,而应着重于具体的感谢事由。其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助,应及时写信予以答谢。否则,人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信,感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外,还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容,否则,泛泛而谈,使人觉得你不够真诚。为此,当你写感谢信时,应这样写:“tha(出自:WwW.zaiDian 在点网:请求信英语作文100字)nk you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。);而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。),这样,使人觉得你既礼貌,又诚心,从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。
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