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生理学基础As we all know, it is very important to keep healthy②. But do you know how to keep healthy? Firstly①, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables②, but less junk food. Secondly①, it's necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. Thirdly①, I think staying up is bad for our health②. If we can't get enough sleep, we won't have much energy all day. Lastly①, listening to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed. If we follow the rules above, we can have a healthy body.
点评：本文用“三步法”描写健康话题：1.引出话题：As we all know, it is very important to keep healthy. 2.具体描述：Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly…Lastly…3.总结概括：If we…, we can…
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添彩点：文章写作时, 恰当地运用了表示顺序的词语：①firstly, secondly, thirdly及lastly使文章思路清晰; 句型：②…it is very important to keep healthy. (形式主语的使用); Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables(祈使句)及…staying up is bad for our health (动名词作主语)的使用, 使得文章句式多样化。