2017高考英语真题及满分作文(全国III卷)
2017年高考已然落下帷幕,不过这也意味着下一届高考序幕的开启。今天,万朋教育小编跟大家一起回顾一下刚过去的2017年高考全国I卷和全国II卷的英语作文真题及优秀满分范文!希望为2018年的准高考生们提供参考。
全国I
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习唐诗;
3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
优秀满分作文
Dear Leslie,
How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.
The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.
If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
全国II
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
  分析:
第一步:审题:1.确定文体:题目中明确要求写邮件邀请Henry,所以用书信体格式。 2.确定时态:参加艺术展,还没有去展会也尚未开始,用一般将来时;此外介绍剪纸艺术应用一般现在时。3.确定人称:题目明确要求“假定你是李华”,所以用第一人称“I”。
第二步:扩展:题目中并没有直接告诉我们展览的细节,所以我们必须要将其展开。时间、地点自己来定,当然中国剪纸艺术展举办地点不能太“小”,选一个既大气自己又会写的单位,时间最好选在周末。此外,其它细节得自己来添加,否则字数远远不够。比如展会的门票收不收费,展会的内容有哪些,可不可以拍照留念等等。
第三步:结构:最好将整篇文章分成3~4段。
学生满分作文(分数:24 四川德阳中学)
Dear Henry
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:
1.逻辑性较好,层次分明,连贯恰当;
2.运用词块、句型丰富;
3.个别用词需要改进,比如说leader不符英语表达习惯;
4.第一段不够简洁。
最后,万朋教育小编为各位高中生们准备了高考作文写作的十大注意事项:
1. 在写作之前,首先对题目进行认真的审清,并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来,这些单词、句型都应是经典的,不会错的。
2. 写作中,多注意使用起承转合的过渡词,使文章更富有条理,层次分明。
3. 多注意使用定语从句,包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯,遇到地名、人名最好用非限制性定语从句,强调唯一性。
4. 多注意使用副词、形容词起到修饰的作用,并注意切忌重复,多使用不同的表达进行转述。多使用高级词汇。
5. 多注意使用被动、倒装、虚拟语气及非谓语动词作定语这样的表达。
6. 学会替换,对不会写的进行替换,换一种说法表达清楚即可
7. 长短句搭配使用。适当分段,切忌一段式作文。
8. 切忌使用Chinglish,改变逐字逐句翻译的不良习惯。
9. 文章中代词要指代明确,拿不准时,宁愿不用代词指代。
10. 英语单词不宜写得太小,卷面保持整洁,写错的地方只需轻轻划一笔就行,忌反复涂黑。
2017年高考作文