2014湖北卷英语作文[共5篇]
第一篇：2014湖北卷英语作文
2015湖北卷
真题展示
请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.写作小贴士
※叙述时必须注意使用一些连接词，使得行文结构清晰，所举事例要切合主旨。
※写作时要注意好时态和人称。
关于志愿者的英语作文满分范例一
As we all know, it’s undoubtedly significant for us to become a responsible member of the s
ociety.However, much to our surprise, it’s not that difficult for us to grow into such a person.Even small things will do.I can remember doing some voluntary work with my classmates in the nursing home near our school on May Day.On our arrival, we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, we
①started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.With everything done, we
②sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time to leave, the elderly people expressed their thanks for our love and help.Tired as we were, we all felt so proud, for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also ③enriched our own lives.满分简评
本文紧扣题目要求，通过描述去敬老院献爱心的事件，向我们讲述了小事情所带来的积极影响，结构清晰，要点齐全。叙述部分恰当运用了一些连接词：however, then等使得文章条理清晰，连贯自然。
①“cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor” 中现在分词作伴随状语，体现考生功底。② 使用了独立主格结构with everything done, 提升了文章的档次。③“for what we did has not only brought joy to others, but also enriched our own lives” 中主语从句和并列连词的使用，使文章加分不少。词汇积累
undoubtedly 毫无疑问地
significant 有意义的 enrich 使丰富 译文
众所周知，成为一个有责任感的社会成员对我们来说毫无疑问是非常有意义的。然而，让我们感到惊讶的是，成为这样一个人并没有那么困难。甚至很小的一件事情就可以实现。
我还记得在五一劳动节那天跟我的同学一起到学校附近的敬老院去开展志愿者活动。一到达那里，我们就向老人们赠送了鲜花和水果。然后，我们就立刻开始劳动了，有的擦窗户，有的扫地。所有这些事情做完了之后，我们就坐在院子里跟老人们聊天。
当我们要离开的时候，老人们纷纷向我们表示感谢，感谢我们的爱与帮助。尽管我们都很累了，但是我们深感自豪，因为我们所做的事情不仅仅给别人带去了快乐，而且也丰富了
我们自己的人生。
满分范例2 Surprising as it may sound, even small things can contribute to helping us to grow up into responsible members of the society, which is of great importance.I will always remember what happened when I was on a visit to a beautiful lake in the ①countryside last Sunday.Having arrived at the lake, I sat on the bench, ready to enjoy the ②scenery.However, just at that moment, I heard a girl calling for help.It was obvious that she was drowning.I immediately rushed around the lake to search for her and found her almost in the center of the lake struggling.On seeing that, I dived into the lake without hesitation and swam ③towards her.Eventually, I bought her back to the bank and rushed her to the hospital with the help of others.When all the people expressed their praise and thanks to me, I felt very proud and happy.And since then, I have decided to make myself be a responsible member of the society.满分简评
本文结构清晰，行文流畅，讲述了勇救落水女孩的事件，提醒我们凡事从身边小事做起。文中连接词和高级语法的使用是亮点，文章分别用having arrived, just at that moment, on
seeing that, immediately, eventually等来标明时间发生的经过，使得行文清晰流畅。①remember后接what引导的宾语从句，宾语从句的使用为本文的亮点之一。②having arrived为现在分词作时间状语，体现了考生的写作能力。③On seeing…的句型的使用也可看出考生对英语的把握。译文
尽管听起来有些令人惊讶，然而甚至小小的事情都可以有助于我们成为有责任感的社会公民，这对我们来说是非常重要的。
我永远都记得上周日我去乡下一个美丽小湖泊游玩时发生的事情。一到达湖边，我就坐在长凳上，准备好好欣赏一下这美丽的风景。然而，就在这个时候，我听到了一个女孩喊救命。很显然她是落水了。我迅速绕湖跑着去寻她，然后发现她正在离湖中心不远处挣扎着。一看见这个情景，我毫不犹豫地跳入湖水里然后朝她游去。最终，我把她带回湖岸然后在别人的帮助下迅速将她送往医院。
当所有人都向我表达称赞和感激的时候，我感到万分的自豪和喜悦。从那时起，我就下定决心一定要让自己成为一个有责任感的社会公民。
满分范例3 I always held the opinion that it is challenging to be a responsible member of the society.However, an activity to remind my schoolmates to stop wasting has changed my attitude towards it.The activity was held by our class last week.First of all, we informed our schoolmates to
②face the problem that some students waste water, electricity, food, paper and so on.Besides, we also help them realize that these bad habits will not only waste the limited natural resources, but they can also have a bad effect on the formation of our character and personality.Most importantly, we took the lead in reducing the waste.Thanks to such an activity, we all start with ourselves to save everything useful around.I am also aware that even a small thing we do can help us grow up into responsible members of the ③society.满分简评
文章通过描述一项班级号召减少浪费的活动，来说明小事情可以带来大的影响。关联词的使用使文章结构清晰，叙述流畅，同时文章也运用了一些高级词汇和复杂语法，利用
①first of all, besides, more importantly作为连接词，使得全文连贯、紧凑。①开篇就使用t
hat引导的同位语从句，体现考生娴熟的写作手法。②同位语从句的再次使用，提升了该文的档次。
③aware后接that引导的宾语从句也为本文加分不少。译文
我曾经认为成为一个有责任的社会公民是一件颇具挑战的事情。然而，一个提醒我校同学们停止浪费的活动改变了我对这个事件的看法。