雅思口语话题part2参考范文之：被污染的地方
Describe a place you visited has been affected by pollution
You should say:
? What the place is
? What type of pollution it is/ are
? Cause and effect of pollution
and explain how can this pollution be controlled.
1.适用考生：全适用
2.主题：旅行地污染
3.故事线：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访(。在你的城市/国家。的地区名称)，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。
雅思口语高分范文示例：
Last year I went to visit (...say an area name in your )with two of my friends and thought we would enjoy our trip. We heard from a teacher that this was a beautiful place to visit and after that, we planned to go there. To our surprise, this place was severely affected by the pollution and instead of enjoying our trip, we cut it short and returned home immediately.
It was early summer last year and visiting a place near a river which is surrounded by natural beauty and recommended by one of our favourite teachers was an excellent idea, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who suggested this place had no idea about the severity of the pollution there and how things have become worse.
The water pollution was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements that were floating on the water created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled waste management, toxic elements from factories and industries, motorised vehicles running on the water and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the main reasons the water has got polluted. More shockingly, the air pollution was also noticeable. I saw many industries and factories that were exhausting black fumes and that has made the air polluted more than any other part I know about.
Uncontrolled urbanisation, the establishment of new factories industries without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in government offices are so far the main reasons for increasing pollution in our country. I wish this will stop and we will be conscious enough not to destroy our own inhabitants.
雅思口语Part2新题范文：被污染了的地方
Topic：Describe a place (city/village) you have been to that was polluted.
You should say:
When and where you went
water pollution Why you went there
What the pollution was like (or what kind of pollution it was)
And explain how you felt about this pollution
参考范文：
I went to Amritsar in last month with my friends.
We went there to pay our obeisance in Shri Harmandir Sahib, commonly known as Golden Temple. This is the famous shrine of Sikhism.
Though this city is called the Holy city but the garbage and pollution has defaced this place.
We went there by train and from railway station we hired an auto rickshaw to reach at our destination.
The auto rickshaw driver took the shortest path to reach quickly. For this he made us go through narrow lanes of the city and residential area.
To our surprise, we found heaps of rubbish lying here and there and the water drains were choked with polythene bags.
We asked the driver if there is any strike of municipal workers as the city streets and roads are not cleaned up but he replied that this is the routine affair.
The city which is famous around the world and is a place of pilgrimage was in a shabby condition.
Besides domestic garbage, factory fumes were also adding in to the existing pollution.
It seemed like evening during noon time as the smoke has engulfed the entire city .We felt trouble in breathing also.
We were surprised at the callous approach of the local administration. There must be strong measures to curb the menace of pollution.
Some days after our visit to Amritsar, I read an article in newspaper about most polluted cities of India and I was shocked to read that Amritsar was rated as one of the most polluted cities of the country.
I wish that this stigma of “polluted city” be removed from the name of Amritsar and people call it Holy city.
雅思口语Part2：去过的一个被污染的地方
Describe a place you have visited that has been affected by pollution.
You should say:
what place it was
why you went there
how it was affected by pollution
and explain how you felt about this situation.
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